English 3366

Style in Technical Communication

Fall 2007
 

T/TH 2-3:20 p.m.

English Bldg., Rm. 352

Instructor: Dr. Rebecca Rickly

Office:  489

Office Hours: T-Th 11-1; M/W 2-4; and by appointment

Phone: 806-742-2500, ext. 268

 

 

Course Description:

 

Welcome to English 3366, Style in Technical Communication. In this course we will examine what constitutes a style, and identify characteristics of the most frequently used styles in technical and professional communication. We will study discourse communities, how they determine which styles are appropriate for which contexts, and how we as authors can determine the appropriateness of a certain style for a situation. Finally, we will learn how to create these styles in our own writing.

Texts:

Jones, D. (1997). Technical Writing Style. Pearson Longman.

Additional research articles.

   

Objectives:

At the end of this class, students will be able to:

 Objective Measurement
Identify and use appropriate style for different audiences Final project, revision projects, final exam.
Be able to choose appropriate language and structure for varying audiences/purposes Final project, revision projects, final exam.
Understand how style affects content, as well as the professional and ethical responsibilities involved. Daily assignments.
Be familiar with grammar, its influence on style, and each student's strengths/weaknesses with grammar. Final project, revision projects, final exam..
Revise for tone, clarity, conciseness, and continuity. Daily assignments, final project, revision projects, final exam.

 

Assignments and Weights:

 

Assignment Percentage of Final Grade
Daily Assignments 20%
Error Project 10%
Style Investigation Project 10%
Revision Project #1 10%
Revision Project #2 10%
Final Project 30%
Final Exam 10%

   

Grading Scale:

  90-100 =   The document is superior.  It exceeds all the objectives of the assignment.  The information is ethical, sophisticated, thorough, and ideally suited for the audience.  The style is clear and appropriate to the subject, purpose,  and audience.  The organization and design of the document make the information understandable, accessible, and usable.  The mechanics and grammar are correct. 
  80-89 =   The document is good.  It meets the objectives of the assignment, but requires minor improvements or reveals easily correctable errors in organization, style, design, grammar, or mechanics. 
  70-79  =   The document is adequate.  It omits useful information or requires significant improvement in organization, style, design, grammar, or mechanics.  It may be formally correct but superficial in its discussion. 
  60-69  =   The document is disappointing.  It meets some of the objectives of the assignment but ignores others; the discussion is inadequately developed, omits important information, or displays numerous or major errors in organization, style, design, grammar, or mechanics. 
  0-59  =   The document is unsatisfactory.  It omits critical information, does something other than the assignment required, or displays major or excessive errors in organization, style, design, grammar, or mechanics. 

Attendance Policy:

You may miss two days of class without penalty. For every absence beyond two, one percent of your final grade will be docked. Grades will not be docked for excused absences, those which are documented by the university or a doctor.

 

HOWEVER, more than five absences in the semester is an automatic failure of the course. Excused absences, those which are documented by the university or a doctor, do count in these five. If you think you might miss more than five classes, you may want to drop the course.

 

If you are absent, please check the webpage to find out what you missed. You are responsible for turning in all assignments on their due date, regardless of absence. Assignments are not accepted late, except in cases of extreme unforsee-ability (car accident or death in the family). You may submit work via email if you are ill. You can have a classmate collect any handouts for you, or you can stop by my office hours to obtain copies.

Plagiarism Policy:

(from Student Affairs Handbook, Part IX, Section C)

"Any student found guilty of dishonesty, cheating, or plagiarism in academic work shall be subject to disciplinary action.

Dishonesty of any kind on examinations and quizzes or on written assignments, illegal possession of examinations, the use of unauthorized notes during an examination or quiz, obtaining information during an examination from the examination paper or otherwise from another student, assisting others to cheat, alteration of grade records, illegal entry or unauthorized presence in an office are instances of cheating.

Complete honesty is required of students in the presentation of any and all phases of work as their own. This applies to quizzes of whatever length as well as to final examination, daily reports, lab work, and term papers.

 

Plagiarism is offering the work of another as one’s own, without proper acknowledgement; therefore, any student who fails to give credit for quotations or essentially identical expression of material taken from books, encyclopedias, magazines, and other reference works, or from the themes, reports, or other writings of a fellow student, is guilty of plagiarism.

 

Instructors are responsible for initiating action in each case of dishonesty or plagiarism that occurs in classes.

In cases of convincing evidence of or admitted academic dishonesty or plagiarism, an instructor should take appropriate action as described below. Before taking such action, however, the instructor should attempt to discuss the matter with the student.

If cheating is suspected on a final exam, the instructor should submit an X grade until a reasonable attempt can be made to contact the student, preferably within one month after the end of the semester.

 

In cases in which guilt is admitted by the student or determined by the instructor, after attempting to contact the student, he or she may give the offending student a failing grade on the assignment or a failing grade in a course. When a student is given a failing grade in a course as a result of academic dishonesty or plagiarism, the instructor shall report the facts of the case and the action to be taken against the student in writing to the instructor’s department chairperson.

If the instructor elects to submit a report to the Dean of Students, the Dean shall retain a copy of this report in his or her discipline files. The student will have the right to appeal the receipt of a failing grade in a course through the established grade appeal procedure. The student may not appeal a failing grade given for a class assignment.

 

In cases of flagrant or repeated violations, instructors may recommend to the Dean of Students, through the department and the Academic Dean’s Office, further disciplinary action pursuant to the disciplinary policy and procedure outlined in the Code. In addition, The Academic Dean or the Dean of Students may initiate disciplinary action for flagrant or repeated violations.

 

A student referred to the Dean of Students Office for disciplinary action for academic dishonesty is entitled to all substantive and procedural guarantees provided in the Code, including, but not limited to, notice and hearing.

 

The disciplinary penalty or grade of F shall not be implemented until the disciplinary procedures or grade appeal process has been exhausted. A student may continue academic class and course work until a final decision is made.

 

A written report of any additional disciplinary action taken by the Dean of Students Office will be sent to the appropriate Academic Dean’s Office and to the student. The final results of a grade appeal in such matters shall be reported to the faculty person by the appropriate Academic Dean in the manner required by the grade appeals procedure, and to the Dean of Students Office. In cases in which a charge of academic dishonesty is sustained, the recommended disciplinary action will be enforced and/or a grade of F reported.

 

In cases in which a charge of academic dishonesty is not sustained, no disciplinary action will be taken, and the student will be entitled to the grade he or she would have received in the absence of a finding of dishonesty. In addition, the student will be allowed to continue in the particular course without prejudice."

 

 

Extenuating Circumstances:

 

If at any time during the semester, personal crises prevent you from performing to the best of your abilities in the course, please notify me as early as possible. Before making exceptions to any of the policies stated in this syllabus, I have the right to request appropriate documentation. This might include letters from physicians, counselors, and/or academic advisors.

 

Disabilities:

 

Students with documented disabilities can expect instructors to make appropriate accommodations. Please contact me early in the semester if this applies to you.

 

 

Calendar

Date

In Class

Homework

Aug 28

Aug 30

  • Read and outline Ch. 1 in the textbook.
  • Write a memo describing the style of three of the writing excerpts at left. Bring the memo into class.

Sep 4

  • Begin Error Project
  • Error project progress report due Tuesday.  Write a memo describing which errors you are studying and how you identified them

Sep 6

  • Read Ch. 7 in the textbook.  Be ready for a quiz.
  • Be able to identify a phrase and a clause.
  • Work on your Error Project.

Sep 11

  • Quiz on Ch. 7
  • Go over excerpts that use many phrases and clauses:
  • NFL rulebook
  • Saggs, Babylonians
  • Learn about sentence structures
  • Online quiz about sentence structures
  • Practice adverbs
  • Write a memo with an example of three different sentence structures
  • Work on Error Project

 

Sep 13

Finish Error Project

Sep 18

  • Complete Library Search
  • Read Ch. 2; be prepared for a quiz/post.
  • Choose your topic and your excerpts for your style investigation project.  Write and bring to class a brief memo describing your project, including copies of your excerpts.

Sep 20

  • Turn in your excerpt memo
  • Post on Ch. 2
  • Discussion of error projects
  • Discussion:  Discourse communities, including which ones you belong to.
  • Discuss Challenger example, using discussion questions
  • Read Ch. 3 in textbook.  Be ready for quiz/post.
  • Work on Style Investigation Project

Sep 25

  • Post on Ch. 3
  • Go over website comparisons to discuss how to describe and give specific support
  • Discuss Style Investigation:  ways of organizing, starting with the overall assessment, using quotation marks
  • Brainstorm a list of possible text features you can address in your style investigation project.
  • Write for five minutes on initial observations for the style investigation project
  • Exchange excerpts with classmates and make initial observations

 

  • Read Ch. 5 in textbook.  Be ready for quiz/post.
  • Work on Style Investigation Project
  • Read Baker's version of Little Red Riding Hood
  • No class on Thursday; make sure you do what's on the syllabus, and what I asked you to do in class.

 

Sep 27

  • Practice assessing syntactic features based on list
  • Describe memo format in detail:  headings, full block, etc.
  • Quiz on Ch. 5
  • Go over quiz in class
  • Reminder about Style Investigation Due Date
  • Discuss diction and discuss problem #2 and #7
  • Look up connotation vs. denotation on Merriam Webster's site.
  • Practice describing style of excerpts
  • Women's heart disease A
  • Women's heart disease B
 

 

  • Work on Style Investigation Project
  • Check out THIS PAGE which changes the style of the same paragraph.

 

Oct 2

  • Possible Guest TBA
  • Make sure you've read chapter 5
  • Do questions 2-1 through 2-8 to turn in.
  • Finish the rough draft of your  Style Investigation Project and bring it to class on Oct 4
  • Optional:  You may choose to check out Urbandictionary.com; it allows readers to define slang and vote and delete other's versions. Be warned: some of the definitions are *very* offensive and not for the faint of heart

Oct 4

  • Peer review/workshop on Style Investigation Project
  • Read Ch. 9; be ready for a tough quiz  ON TUESDAY
  • Turn in Rough Draft of your Style Investigation Project by midnight, Saturday
  • Make sure you've responded IN-DEPTH to the paper below yours on webboard

Oct 9

  • Denotations/Connotations
  • Quiz/post on Ch. 9
  • Read open heart surgery example
  • Read and respond to classmates' posts to memo assignment:  which have good tone?  How was that tone achieved?
  • Discuss memo assignment

 

  • Post on revision example.  Discuss tone and how it is achieved, with specific examples.  Be prepared to give two or three suggestions for revision.
  • Finish your  Style Investigation Project.  Make sure it includes excerpts at the end; just add them before your references.
  • Read Ch. 8; be prepared for a quiz

 

Oct 11

  • STYLE INVESTIGATION PROJECTS DUE
  • Quiz on Ch. 8
  • Do the snow policy exercise

 

  • Read Ch. 4 and be ready for a quiz/post
  • Email me with either 1) your final project topic and your source for info or 2) the topic you'd like me to find you a source for.

 

Oct 16

 

  • Quiz/post on Ch. 4
  • Revision Assignment #1 introduced
  • Discuss Revision Assignment #1
  • Demonstrate the "what they need to know what they need to do, and what tone to use" technique
  • Practice revision exercise

 

  • Read Ch. 7
  • Work on your Revision Project:  Bring in a draft Thursday

 

 Oct 18

  • Workshop on Revision Assignment

 

  • Finish Revision Project

 

Oct 23
  • Review Ch. 4
  • Find websites which demonstrate Rogerian argument, logos, ethos, pathos, and Toulmin logic
  • Write example of each type of persuasion

 

  • Read Ch. 6 and be ready for a quiz/post
Oct 25

 

 

Oct 30
  • Quiz/post on Ch. 12
  • Revising for style and bias
  • Check out the OWL at Purdue's advice on editing

 

Nov 1

 

Nov 6
  • Discuss Final Project
  • Small group work on selecting TOPIC and AUDIENCE for final project

 

  • Work on final project--make sure you have TOPIC and AUDIENCE selected for next class

 

Nov 8

 

Nov 13
  • Work Day--No Class
  • Work on final project
  • Read Ch. 11, "Determining the Ethics of Style".  Be ready for a quiz.
Nov 15
  • Further discussion of audience and purpose
  • Quiz on Ch. 11
  • Discussion of ethics of style as they might apply to Final Project
  • Review the papers you've finished and make a "cheat sheet" for yourself, to help you revise.
  • Read Ch. 10, and be ready for a quiz
Nov 20
  • Quiz on Ch. 10
  • Talk about style and bias
  • Discuss the case study at the end of Ch. 10

 

 

Nov 27
  • Revising Day
  • Work on final project
  • Bring copies of project and materials to work on in class
Nov 29
Dec 4
  • Final Project Due
  • Review for Final Exam
  • Guess the Test!
  • Course Evaluations
  • Study for Final Exam
Dec 6
  • Review for Final Exam
  • Study for Final Exam

Finals week

FINAL EXAM DEC 11 10-12